Nyceness!
I think the story was awsome, the idea of a place in which beeings reside between heaven and hell, thats really cool. Voice acting was a little stale, I know you did it yourself, and I can tell you made due with the sound editing programs which you have (prolly just the windows sound recorder) but thats not to say you coulden't have been a touch more enthusiastic with the actual recording of the voices themselves. However, dispite that small minor flaw I find the series very creative and captavating. Please continue to make more!